chunjuwu wrote:
Paul wrote:
"that" does NOT have to be preceded by a noun, especially in the idiom of intensity "so...that"
Vithal perfectly explained why D is wrong
Break down D:
A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life
1- may be so brisk [that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words],
conjunction: and
2- results in not making sense of speech
We can agree that subject, conversational pace "may be so brisk that...", but we cannot say that it is the "conversational pace" which results in X. Instead, it is the fact that it is "so brisk" which "results in..." as B says.
Hope it is clear
Hi, Paul, I thought the structure is
A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk that it
1) hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words,
conjunction: and
2) results in not making sense of speech
then, I cannot see any wrong here. Because it is still "so brisk" which "results in...." as you said.
I think the "level at which" parallelism occurs isnt correctly explained in this thread. Here is what i mean:
The OA is correct because of the following reason:
A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk that it hampers the ability of some children
(1) to distinguish discrete sounds and words
<AND>, [as a result], -----> parenthetical element
(2) to make sense of speech
Perfect parallelism. Apply (1) and (2) to the main stem and you will see that it makes sense.
Try this with D:
A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk that it hampers the ability of some children
(1) to distinguish discrete sounds and words
<AND>
(2) results in not making sense of speech.
The original breakdown by Paul, Vithal would lead us to the following for #2:
A new study suggests that the converstional pace of everyday life results in not making sense of speech
I think [from a meaning perspective] this is okay. But no matter how you breakdown the root statement from the "parallel elements", D doesnt provide you good parallelism, which is why it is wrong.
Paul, Vithal or anyone else please chime in if the above explanation is wrong.
Another general question:
For parallelism does the parallel elements have to be identical from a syntax perspective. For e.g. if you had "phrases" as parallel elements i dont it would suffice to have just "phrases" even the "types of phrases" have to be the same too, correct?
You simply cannot have one parallel element be an infinitive phrase and another element be another [not infinitive phrase] type of phrase?
I guess the above example proves that for parallelism to be 100% correct 2 things need to happen:
1) each individual element needs to make sense with the stem
and
2) each individual element must also be of the same grammatical type. For e.g. The list should have all infinitve phrases or all gerund phrases or all relative clauses, etc, etc.
Paul [and other SC Gods] could you please confirm this?