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Joined: 04 Jun 2007
Status:Um... what do you want to know?
Posts: 5456
Own Kudos [?]: 698 [0]
Given Kudos: 14
Location: SF, CA, USA
Concentration: Technology, Entrepreneurship, Digital Media & Entertainment
Schools:UC Berkeley Haas School of Business MBA 2010
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GPA: 3.9 - undergrad 3.6 - grad-EE
WE 1: Social Gaming
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Joined: 01 Nov 2006
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Concentration: Social Enterprise
Schools:The Duke MBA, Class of 2009
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Location: SF, CA, USA
Concentration: Technology, Entrepreneurship, Digital Media & Entertainment
Schools:UC Berkeley Haas School of Business MBA 2010
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WE 1: Social Gaming
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I like #3, 4, and 5 for your community involvement with leadership in it and I think #1 is damn good for leadership, but I am a little concerned that it is still in a work setting. This would have been stronger if it was outside of your company, but it’s still good.

One thing that I would try to keep out of with someone with your breadth of experience is the laundry list. Take from all of this key points and how it has made you into the leader in the community you are today and focus the essay around your attributes and use these experiences are supporting those attributes.
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Location: SF, CA, USA
Concentration: Technology, Entrepreneurship, Digital Media & Entertainment
Schools:UC Berkeley Haas School of Business MBA 2010
 Q51  V41
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great comments zakk! I will avoid making this into a laundry list and focus focus focus!

as for your comment on leadership, I think they wanted to see leadership both in the workplace AND in the community, right?
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